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The world, it is a place full of mystery, happiness and grief. However in my world it's filled with death and love, well mostly death; if you're wondering why this is, it is because all through my life I have had countless near death experiences, so many in fact that sometimes I'm not sure if I'm alive or not. This is what got me obsessed with the Grim Reaper or as the skeleton with a scythe who harvests your souls. I would spend hours upon hours trying to learn about this bringer of death. This dark character that feeds upon your souls and is everyone's worst nightmare...unless you want to die.







"Come out, come out from where ever you are!" the fair haired woman cried out. "I give up now, you win!"

The park was empty and silent, besides the rustling of the pine trees, and the muffled words of the wind. The fair haired woman was out in the open of the park, wind whipping her hair across her tanned slender face.

"BOO!" a little pale, dark haired girl shouted. The fair haired woman jumped at the sudden split in the peace, and turned to see the little girl grinning showing her gleaming teeth.

"That wasn't very nice you know," the fair haired woman said. "Cause now I'm going to get you." She started chasing the little girl, sprint and threatening to tickle her.

She caught the little girl then began tickle her. The little girl sent out a soundwave of laughter that travelled throughout the park. "Stop it!" the little girl screeched. "It sting and make me sad!"

"Sorry sweetheart," the fair haired woman said kindly, smiling at the little girl.

A brittle chill suddenly filled the air within the park. The wind blow violently and the park began to darken.

"It's getting late, we should start leaving now," the fair haired woman whispered hesitantly, urging the little girl to move.

"But I want to stay!" the little girl whimpered, dropping to the ground arms crossed.

"We have to go now," the woman urged again, trying to lift the little girl up.

Thunder boomed and rumbled above them, sending the little girl to her feet. The wind began to whip round them more violently thrusting the little girl to the ground. Lightning crackled through the sky, rain began teeming down soaking the girl and the woman.

"Let's go now!" the woman yelled. All the same her words were swallowed up by the sounds form the thunder and by the wind wiping them away.

"What's going on!" the little girl cried, tears starting to fall from her dark eyes.

"It's alright sweetie!" the woman shouted over the activity in the sky. "I'm coming!"

The woman started to push her way through the edgy wind and pelting rain, trying to make her way to the little girl. She was starting to reach the little girl, and then suddenly she was rammed to the ground brutally by a shadowy blur. The woman winced from the pain; she tried to get her bearings to relocate the little girl. The woman was then struck again by the shadowy blur, sending her into the air and hurtling back to the ground. The woman wailed out, and with what was left of her strength struggled into standing up to try to get herself to the little girl. The blur all of a sudden came and griped her throat slowly lifting the woman off the ground.

"Who are you?" the woman gagged, trying her best to breathe. "Why are you doing this?" the blur said nothing, but tightened its grip.

The woman's throat started to bleed, the blurs grip still kept tightening. Tears welded up in the woman's hazel eyes, the little girl watched in fear as the woman was slowly being choked to death. The blur abruptly with colossal force squeezed the woman's neck and it ruptured, sending out a burst of blood and gore.

"SCAR!" was the last word the woman said, before she became a lifeless corpse.

The blur's shape developed into a human figure wheels of darkness coming off its body. It turned its newly formed head to the little girl; she was frozen to the ground fear bleeding from her dark eyes. She stared at this horrid creature that had murdered her mother. Her eyes all of a sudden closed and she gave way to her legs. She lied their on the ground unconscious. The shadowy figure turned away from the little girl, it walked away gradually disintegrating until it was no more. The little girl laid their, all alone and wet surrounded by what was left of her once breathing living mother.
This is the Prologue to my book/story called 'Love Reaps'. It is a fantasy, Horror, Romance, Comedy, etc.
Hope u enjoy it
Please give me idea's for the rest of it
And of course comment on it!





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E-M-O-girl45 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
This was the best thing if read since the last book of Harry potter!  It was so dark and uxpecting and I love the tittle...that's what caught my attention...:-)
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Im going to finish this story and start a series after I finish this year. 
But thank you :) 
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Sharnaeisawesome Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
it was amazing. so vivid and dark. god that was the highlight of reading. i've read a lot of books but that was the best passage i've ever come across.
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, that really means the world to me. However, I wish I could get more time to continue and keep writing.
But, I am forever grateful that you have taken the time to read my story, well at least the Prologue. :) Morbid, dark, writing is what I love.
Sincerely,
Paigey.
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Sharnaeisawesome Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
well your writings great!!! and i can't get my eyes off the screen. i just finished part 12. i wish i was as good as you at writing!
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'm sorry it doesnt go too much further. I know how the rest goes, until it reaches the end. But, I may finish it sometime.
I just am a total book worm/nerd, and I have the imagination of a 5 year old...but more morbid and probably a bit too sexual in some ways...but a five year old has a immense imagination, which is what I meant. :blush:
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Sharnaeisawesome Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
i know the feel. i all ways have really weird dreams. i have this one dream that plants take over the world i had kept dreaming it over and over again for at least a year. it was really creepy and that's not even the weirdest dream i've had. oh and i can't wait for part 15 it should be AWESOME!!!
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I've written down some of my dreams on here.
"Bloody Unfortunate Love", and others...
But yes, on "Love Reaps" ive done up to I think part 21/22...can't quite remember, but one or the other.
Enjoy them; for that's the reason I wrote them down.
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Sharnaeisawesome Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
yer i found part 15
ur writing is awesome and i'm really enjoying it i'll be telling all my friend especially chloe my BBF she loves ur style of writing
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I haven't yet finished obviously, but I should get there someday! Hahah :laughing:
And thank you so much and also to your BFF. I'm glad you enjoy it :)
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